once again, amazing story. I absolutely loved the plot, and I always love your characterization of joe and patrick. it was interesting to read Patrick as being so petty and mean, but you did it well. you win for the usage real notes from the director's cut of take this to your grave. (i really want that cd/dvd.) I was reading this on my phone's browser and when I scrolled to see the orange part, I squeed a little. and it's awesome how they worked into the story. great job, and i'm obviously stoked for the next installment of "TWNW..."
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I absolutely loved the plot, and I always love your characterization of joe and patrick. it was interesting to read Patrick as being so petty and mean, but you did it well.
you win for the usage real notes from the director's cut of take this to your grave. (i really want that cd/dvd.) I was reading this on my phone's browser and when I scrolled to see the orange part, I squeed a little. and it's awesome how they worked into the story.
great job, and i'm obviously stoked for the next installment of "TWNW..."