I loved this. There's not nearly enough fic that explores Patrick's pissy asshole side, despite all the canonical references too it and that note about pissing somewhere in Joe's room pretty much proves that there so needs to be. You did a really great job of making Patrick seem like an asshole but a sympathetic enough one that I still wanted him to work out his shit and hook up with Joe, and Joe! I loved him here, so insecure, so geeky, and so totally into Patrick. I love that you were able to take such a great piece of canon and work into your story-those types of details are my favorite and always make a story so much more enjoyable for me. Thanks for sharing, every time I read one of your stories I'm reminded that I desperately need more Patrick/Joe in my life:)
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