ext_83393 ([identity profile] sharon-hate.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] damagereport 2007-12-18 12:04 am (UTC)

I totally forgot to leave a comment! At least I remembered now.

Have I mentioned how well you write Joe's family interaction? It would have been real easy to half-ass his home life, which I think most writers tend to do. But you've managed to insert all these sweet, little details and give them all real feelings. Adds a lot of dimension to Joe.

Haha... I try not to leave just, "how cute!" comments for you.

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