Aww - thank you! I really appreciate the effort. It's always good to know if you're doing something specific right.

:)

I actually find myself holding back on the details I want to write into this stuff, sometimes, because otherwise you'd end up with huge, huge chapters. I almost wish I was writing this from more than one POV, as well, so I could flesh out the others a bit more, instead of leaving everyone to just handle Joe's POV.

But thank you - I'm glad you're still enjoying it.