I loved this dude. I'm glad you didn't give up and settle for the first version, because as much as I know pushing on with this one sucked for you, it was so worth it. And adding that last little bit of awkward dialouge really made that last scene work without feeling quite so simple.
I am genuingly never going to be able to look at them without wondering now though... ahaha.
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I am genuingly never going to be able to look at them without wondering now though... ahaha.