Aw, thanks, hon. I did kind of agonise over that scene, because it was something that needed to go in because it's referenced again in later chapters, and it does a lot (along with the shower thing) to represent that whatever they want to think, they really are just kids still at this point, but I wasn't sure if I'd quite hit the right note with it.
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Date: 2008-12-08 10:31 am (UTC)I do warn you though, there's more angst to come.